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I had a dream that I was dead.

Most of the faces I did not recognize.
There was a room; and a voice.
I felt like I shouldn't have been there.
There were so many people, and I was scared.
There was a familiar face in the endless crowd;
Someone from long ago.

They were smiling.
And then the room was gone.

I was stood in a park, in the rain.
It was so sad, but beautiful too.
The ground was covered in dead leaves,
and I could hear trees rustling in bitter wind.
There was thunder, but I wasn't scared.

I wanted to stay there forever, in the rain.


I had a dream that I was alive.
I usually don't upload poetry, but I wanted to share something I wrote after a dream I had once, which has stayed with me.

Sorry if it's boring, heh.
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Hypershadic4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
just click my name to go to my profile
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Hypershadic4 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It's so touching :'( plz look at my pic to see how i feel It's also called images
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Dewdropsoncobwebs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I love this poem. So beautiful!
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GR3YSUN Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
OMFG
This is amazing.
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NoorNomad Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
this’s so beautifully written. i could visualize the dream. congratulations….
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LittleMissChess Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I like how the mood changes throughout the poem. I also really like the last line, "I had a dream that I was alive." :love:
Concise and gets the point across. Good job!
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Writer
I liked the imagery in this poem, good job! :)
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missituk Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Beautiful poem! I love the line "I waited to stay there forever, in the rain." :heart:
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Arkeresia Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!! I'm glad you like it
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DiamondPhoenix12 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
:heart:
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